Yes I know this part sucks. To me this part keeps going on and on

I felt so mad when I finished it.

I do feel horrible about writing this. It's makes me want to

Also since this is a new legend and series I have been typing there are lots of pups being born but no details!
Anake:
[link]Zarotora:
[link]Natasha: (crappy picture I did)
[link]Luke:
[link]Suddenly five bears surrounded me. I growled at the largest one who was a pitching black. The one in the back tried to claw my back but I jumped on the forehead of the pitch-black one. I bit his right eye and as the bear was trying to slash at me. It brought its claw near my back fast and I jumped over its head.
The bear roared in pain. I turned around and saw that both eyes had been clawed out from the blow. The brown one tried to ram me but I bit its nose. The bear clawed my forehead and I yelled. I jumped off the bear and ran into the back bear. It knocked over and I bit its chest. I hung on and tried to mange all five. It was hard and tiring. The pitch-black one clawed my back. I panted and jumped at a brown one. It clawed my back again and left scars. I panted and growled at every bear. I barked at the bears and growled, You arent worth killing me. The bears growled and ran off into the forest. I panted and fell on the ground. Natasha...please raise them well. I thought. Everything went black as I started to slip away.
Yes i know it was

So don't rub it in that it was bad because I know it. Also each chapter has a different point of view. That one had Anake's point of view. This other one is from Zarotora's view.
I lead the pack and looked behind to see how they were doing.
Natasha had a tear dripped from her eyes," Why must he die when he has pups to raise?"
I was kinda shocked but then remembered what he told me a bit ago. Listen, Zaro. If I die soon please, I want you to help Natasha raise my pups. Understood Anake.
Tears fell from my eyes and I shook them away," He's alive." Natasha yelled," How can you be sure? He was fighting five bears!" I turned my head and said," How'd you know?"
She sighed," I heard, and smelled them." I heard a panting and whimpering sound. I turned around fast and I saw Anake, bloody and hurt limping forward.
Natasha had tears falling from her eyes and she ran toward him," Anake! Anake." She sniffled,"You're alive.." Anake licked her face," Natasha dear, I'm a bear-hound. Do you think I would die before my pups were born?" She sniffed and laid her head on his shoulder.
Snake I saw roll his eyes,"Okay this is a touching moment and all but we have to keep moving to that place Anake said."
Anake got serious and said," Yes for once he is right." I grabbed Anake's neck and threw him on top of me.
He looked at me as if I had something on my face.
I laughed and said," You helped me I'm helping you." He smiled and nodded.
I looked over at Rairii who was staring at a tree," You know where this place is right?"
He nodded. "I want you to lead the way while I carry Anake."
Rairii nodded and walked in front. He was a quiet dog but was a good friend. I followed him closely behind. Rairii looked like Anake but he didn't have all the scars and he had green eyes like the grass.
I was sure we walked five miles before the rain started. I looked out in front of Rairii and saw a large sign sticking out of the ground. Snake ran in front and read the sign," We're here guys!" He yelled. I gave out a sigh of relief and walked to the clearing. I dropped Anake down carefully under a cliff side-which I thought would be a good den.
Natasha laid down next to him and fell asleep. I walked on top of the little cliff side and laid down. Rairii sat up in front of Anake and listened to something. Maybe voices? Maybe animals? It didn't matter to him. I sighed and sniffed the air. I heard Beka coming closer and ran up to me. She panted and said," Zaro...tora... Lika is.... had her pups...." I flinched and ran of the cliff and to where Beka told me she was. I walked to Lika and saw three small Kai Kens. I sat by the three tiger-striped pups and watched them.
Lika looked up at me and smiled, I smiled back. One was a dark black one, the largest one was red one like my brother Click. The last one-the runt- was the color of me. He was the smallest and was smaller then my paw. He shivered in the wind and curled against the red one. I sighed and said," That's Luke." Lika looked up and nodded.
She repeated," Luke...."
I looked at the middle sized one or the black one and said to her,"and then the other one is Laraka." She nodded and licked Donato on the head.
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The next part takes place two months later in Anake's point of view.
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Awesome Pixel Avatar is made by Baltra
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Rokurou of the Fight
Son of John and Alula
Alula daughter of Tony and Lydia
Tony brave substitute of John
Zeus son of Gin and Spirit.
Gin, son of the first Ohu leader Riki.
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Rokurou of the Fight
Son of John and Alula
Alula daughter of Tony and Lydia
Tony brave substitute of John
Zeus son of Gin and Spirit.
Gin, son of the first Ohu leader Riki.
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For every light there is a shadow ... for every love there is hate ... through frustration there is understanding ... despite the pain and through sadness we justify revenge ... and so we fight ... why?
I'm trying to get opinions on the story I'm writing.
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Rokurou of the Fight
Son of John and Alula
Alula daughter of Tony and Lydia
Tony brave substitute of John
Zeus son of Gin and Spirit.
Gin, son of the first Ohu leader Riki.
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Rokurou of the Fight
Son of John and Alula
Alula daughter of Tony and Lydia
Tony brave substitute of John
Zeus son of Gin and Spirit.
Gin, son of the first Ohu leader Riki.
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Rokurou of the Fight
Son of John and Alula
Alula daughter of Tony and Lydia
Tony brave substitute of John
Zeus son of Gin and Spirit.
Gin, son of the first Ohu leader Riki.
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